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Rosebud: Homecoming ~ Part 1
Ardaigh's mind wandered as she rode with her little army through the forest leading to what was once Rosellia.  She thought of her beloved daughter back in Avalonne.  The little boy she'd already fallen in love with.  Her dearest friends.  Her loving husband, who rode beside her.  All the things she could lose if this rebellion went wrong.  
"Ari?" Garrett said beside her, drawing her thoughts back to the present.  
She looked at him.  "Yes?"
"We're almost there," he replied.  "Are you sure you want to do this?"
She sighed, looking around at those who had volunteered to take back her kingdom with her.  So many faces, both foreign and familiar, all willing to fight.  Above them, she heard the growls and chatter of the dragons that had so eagerly come along.  "We can't turn back now, Garrett," she said.  "We've come too far to give up."
He nodded, and not long after, the troupe broke through the treeline.  Ardaigh coul
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Confession
Lucilla waited for her father in his room, but she didn't have to wait for long, her father came into the room soon enough. "Daddy, I was waiting for you, you told me you would be here. Where were you?" Lucilla asked her Father. "I was in a meeting, my dear" Viserys said to his daughter. 

"Papa, there's something I need to tell you, and it is important" Lucilla said, she had come here to tell her father about her pregnancy and now that he was here, she couldn't get herself to tell him. "What is it? Is something wrong, Lucilla?" Viserys asked.

He was sensing Lucilla's discomfort, he stepped forward and held Lucilla's hand, leading her to the sitting area, where they sat on a couch. 

"Now tell me what is it?" Viserys asked, taking her hand in his own.

"Papa... I... I'm pregnant" she said, trembling in fear of her father's wrath.

"You what?" Viserys asked, his eyes widened at her revealation.

"I'm pregnant with Tiberius's child" she told him again, this caused him to sigh.
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So Lucilla has told Viserys about her pregnancy.

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Psylocke Daughter
Name: Eleanor "Ellie" Stewart

Parents: Elizabeth "Betsy" Braddock (Psylocke) & James Malcolm Stewart (A historical-fictional character)

Age: 23

Power/Abilities: Various psychic and telepathic abilities, Precognition, Skilled hand-to-hand combatant, Ability to construct weapons made of psychic energy, skilled sword fighter, can use a range of weapons, magical abilities, sharp nails and canine's etc.

Alias: None

Orientation: Heterosexual 

Stance: Anti-Hero

Occupation: 

Appearance: As Seen above

Personality: Working on it

Likes: Magic, her father, Men, She has a thing for male villains, make-up, shopping, clothes, dancing, training with her dad, history etc.

Dislikes: Responsibility, Rules, people who treat her any differently than they like to be treated, being ordered around, discrimination etc.

Fun Fact: She has a Scottish accent, and she is a Princess due to her father being a part of the Scottish Royal Dynasty the Stewarts.

Backstory: Working on it

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Heart youngwolf13
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Isis
Name: Iset (the Egyptian Pronouciation and original version of her name) and Isis (Greek version of her name)

Age: As old as the creation of the universe

Powers/Abilities: Magic, Control over elements, vast phsychic abilities, can speak all languages, superhuman strength, speed, durability, stamina, longevity, dense tissue, healing factor, she can use a wide range of weapons and all kinds of Martial Arts.

Alias: Mother-Goddess


Orientation: Heterosexual/Polyamourous 

Occupation: Goddess of health, marriage, children and wisdom, Protector of the Dead

Appearance: As above

Personality: Kind, Caring, Ambitious, has a bad temper, she won't openly show her anger everytime though, intelligent, clever, a little manipulative, cunning etc.

Likes: Night time, the desert, her brother and lover Set, Horus, 

Dislikes: mythology because it's not always true, Osiris, her father Geb for forcing her into an unwanted marriage, being disrespected

Best Friends: Set (her brother)

Significant Other: (Osiris is her ex-husband, and she is the lover of her brother Set, but she doesn't have any significant other) None

Fun Fact: She is an Egyptian Goddess

Backstory: Isis is the older daughter of Geb and Nut and the younger sister of Osiris and Set, she has a younger sister Nephthys. Isis was the lover of her brother Set, she loved and still loves Set dearly with all her heart, but she was forced to marry her other brother Osiris after Set was looked over and the crown was given to Osiris, and Set was married to their younger sister Nephthys. But despite their marriages, Isis and Set continued to see each other. Isis knowing that Set loved her and would understand her, she told him that she was treated badly by Osiris, but her brother did not believe her at first, but after he saw Osiris not treating Isis well, he killed him, much to Isis's horror, she did not want her brother to die. Isis with the help of her sister began looking for pieces of Osiris's body and brought him back to life. Isis began to see Set again, and the two conceived Horus, though it is now widely thought Horus is the son of Osiris, that is not the truth. After Osiris apologized to her Isis and Osiris decided to seperate, and Osiris and Seth began their rule, as co-monarchs, and Isis still plays the role of Queen to both her brothers.

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Test by :iconjochannon:

Borrowed from: :iconechoesofanenigma:

Mary Sue/Gary Stu test: for my O.C Natasha de Clare

Appearance

[] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change colour
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender (Boy's think she's cute)
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[x] They have a guardian spirit (a Hada, not really sure if it's a guardian spirit xD)
[] Some part of their body glows(that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race)
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They have wings 
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (she wears a family necklace, but not as often as she ought to)
Subtotal: 3

Relations

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[] They have an evil nemesis
[] Who is their sibling
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[x] They are from a very rich/royal family (Nat belongs to a Rich family)
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 

Race/Species

[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] But they struggle to be good anyway
[] They are a mythical creature
[] They are an alien
[] They are part mythical creature
[] They are part alien
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Subtotal: 

Powers

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc (She can mind-read to some extent)
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[x] They have a special ability/power (Because she's my O.C from :icongHeroicAcademy: yes, she has the power to Generate and Manipulate of Nature)
[] But they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift 
[] They are immortal(cannot be killed by conventional means)
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Anyone can talk TO spirits; it's getting them to talk back that is the hard part)
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Subtotal: 2

Mentality

[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities(x2 if this is shown to be funny)
[x] They are very intelligent (She's quite intelligent, if not overly intelligent)
[] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[] They have hallucinations
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
Subtotal: 1

Miscellaneous

[] They are physically strong
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[x] They are connected with a certain element (Nature)
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type 
[] They cry blood
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[] They come from two such lines
[] Which have been at war for all of history
[] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way (my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this)
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
Subtotal: 1

Total: 7


Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[/] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[] They do not care much about others
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 0.5


Final Total: 6.5

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.

26> -Mary-Sue 

This is not a definitive test: with all the variety of people there are, a character could very well score a 26  on this and not a Mary-Sue; but these are all things that Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus tend to have in common, so if your character scores high on this test, it is likely(not definite, but likely) that said character is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu

This is for my O.C from :iconheroic-academy:
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  • Eating: Chocolate Cake
  • Drinking: Coffee

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